All Comments on 'Unfair Initiation'

You need to write more! I loved the story!

I'll wait for the second part, but it will difficult to make it better than the first one

Literally the best story I've ever read on her. Do write more.

Great story. Cant wait for part 2

Wow, this was an unbelievably great story. High anticipation for part 2!

A problem if seems a lot of the writers for this fetish have is that the numbers they use are so over and under blown it seems like they’ve never seen a penis or a ruler before.

This isn’t furry, so hyper-sized 14 inch horse dicks make no sense. And pre-pubescent sizes make no sense either. Don’t go above 11 or below 3. It’s SMALL penis humiliation, not micropenis humiliation. A major part of it is the subject having one big enough to think Maybe it’ll be fine. Completely removing any illusion by making it physically impossible doesn’t work.

Great story - minor edit. His pre-shrunk size doesn't need to be 14 inches. Maybe 8-10, something where he would walk around with some Big-Dick energy, but no so big it would make the news. Would love a continuation. It's hinted at that the effects were temporary within a certain time, maybe there's a way to reverse it or get a second chance!

Hi, great story. is there any follow up or doe it end here.

You briefly switch from third to first person in the 4th and 9th paragraphs

Please continue this story, it is fantastic. Maybe the sequel ends with him shrinking even more?... just a thought.

Hopefully he gets his dick back

Great story, please continue

Oooh, how I want that drink! I wish it was real!

Please continue the story with him not only getting his dick back, but fucking the absolute hell out of Megan and her fat tits while the sorority brothers get their own dicks shrunk