All Comments on 'Unforeseen Ch. 01'

by MaitreG

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Minor detail you might want to edit: He talks after being ball-gagged.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Interesting premise.

But it's nothing but beating/whipping/flogging.

Two stars.

MaitreGMaitreGover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you, Anonymous. That was a stupid slip. Although it's possible to be understood around a gag, I should have added some 'mumble' detail. Once I find out how to edit it, that will be changed. And yes, it is restricted in terms of techniques, but that is not central to the story line.

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