All Comments on 'Unforgetable'

Was this utter nonsense or just a dash of fantasy in Fantasyland. Fantasy usually results when somethings happen that would be wonderful to have happen to you. I'm not sure that I would ever want something like this to happen to me...ever! So is this a 4* or a 2* story. I'll call it a 3* and let it go at that. I thought about my 4 criteria of excellence: plot, character development, dialog and mechanics and realized that I didn't really like or dislike this story for any of those. It was just ehh.

Whats not to love!

When even a one word title is spelled incorrectly, I don't bother with the rest.

I like your additions to the bare outline of the events.

Left me smiling.

I was thinking reading the back half of the story, "why the hell did he make it imaginary when a simple shift in views (Janice's) would have made it infinitely better." Your last few sentences proved me wrong. Excellent finish! 5*

He finally broke out of the trap!

5

Great story. Thanks for sharing.