Unforgiving

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mustanger7up
mustanger7up
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I always wondered why they never turned me in, but for some reason they didn't. Sometimes, things turn out alright after all.

Authors Note:

This story is Pure Fantasy, it never happened. It was only written for, You the Reader and my own enjoyment only!

I do NOT believe in, or participate in Incest, Violence towards Women

OR the Sexual Abuse of a Child of any age, consenting or not!

If you enjoyed this story, please drop me an email with any suggestions or fantasies you would like to read about.

Yes, I am a warped individual, but at least I still have my sense of humor! ;-)

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RodimusMikeRodimusMikealmost 5 years ago
Obviously

Melanie grew to like being raped by him eventually,and so did Ray when he fucked Ray's ass,but that's not what I want to talk about,Melanie is,like I said she started enjoying it,so I think the Rapist should have taken Melanie and turned her into his cock slave whore.

He abviously thought she was decent looking somewhat,so why not turn her into his submissive slave and grow to love and dominate her the way she wants him to.People say love can't happen when your in a dominant/submissive role,but thats a crock of shit,some view submission as servitude or slavery but some are happy to not have to deal with life's problems and just want a simple happy life like that.

jimbo103jimbo103over 8 years ago
there is a genre of literature, which is left in silence

male rape, prison rape, these are all silent topics, not to be discussed by the civilized. BUT SO WAS THE CASE OF KITTY GENOVESE. 38 "NEIGHBORS" TURNED DEAF, DUMB & MUTE WHILE 3:15 on the morning of March 13, 1964 AFTER RETURNING FROM HER WORK,HER LAST WORDS WERE "IT'S KITTY, AM HURT, HELP ME!".

SHE was stabbed repeatedly by "Winston Moseley" a black man(not that has any effect but i do not wish to be pc not hurt ur sentiments) followed by raping her, now if you feel anything i would point out that there is more to the story then appears,

the crime here is not of a race related, but perpetrated by a self confessed serial rapist & murderer, who raped 3 women including a 15 yr old, a women whom he held hostage during a prison transfer which he escaped from while he raped the woman in front of a husband.

today at 76 years age facing a life sentence which was commuted down from a death sentence later, has been denied parole again for failure to show remorse, according to him it was a mugging turned out bad, & "people sometimes die in a mugging".

he has been identified as schizophrenic, while the case led to define the "bystander effect".

the crime here was also NOT of apathy by the 38, but rather of being confronted with something so brutal, nobody believed possible, "here in ken gardens"

remember the time was 1964, it was 3 in the morning, a lot of precipitating factors led to the unfortunate defeat of kitty genovese when she was accosted by a monster in human form. she never knew that was her last night at the age of 28.

i was born in the 80's, i never knew abt kitty until i heard abt it in the movie BOONDOCK SAINTS.

the genovese murder did not gain much attention for 10 days, but abe rosenthal, published an article about the silent neighbors who watched the crime.

today after 50 years, i believe, that the truth however damning, after a reasonable period of time has to come out, because if youth never learn truth in its entirety, they will repeat history,

now for legal reasons i understand, sometimes the complete truth may never be revealed to prevent panic & lawlessness, as inteligence takes effort, stupid is just is.

the point of my lengthy tirade is simple, its a request, to the author & all who read,

there is a genre of literature which allows you to write about the truth without repercussion from law & to some extent the press, its Reality Fiction, though you loose the effect the certifiable truth had, you give people like me who try to read between lines a chance to seek out the "untold truth"

i always say that a coin has 3 side to it. dont believe me? hold a coin between the the pads of ur thumb & index finger, heads against index & tails surface against the thumb,

if you look at the coin now long enough, you will see a side of the coin which was always there but you never paid attention to.

dont worry be happy,

knowledge is my curse, memories my cruel mistress, loneliness my concubine & darkness my mother, yet i wouldn't have it any other way.

sinsational83sinsational83over 9 years ago
Nice work

Got to say that was a pretty story. The people deserved worse than what he did to them, he should have tazed her pussy till it was burned and did the same to the guys cock so they would forever remember that night. they should have been tortured till they both never forgot what they did. But all-in-all a pretty damn good story.

chytownchytownover 11 years ago
Good Read***

Short but well written.

roscovichroscovichover 12 years ago
Inept and pathetic writ.

One of the worst in this genre. This is real bottom feed.

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