All Comments on 'Unholy Desires'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Damn this made me so wet. This was hot. Can’t wait to read the second part. Have to take care of something now…

DanDraperDanDraperover 1 year ago

Wonderful story. Thanks or the fun read.

5-stars.

lexstrokerlexstrokerover 1 year ago

Oh, damn… I like how this is starting out. Lots of sexual tension and the religious aspect makes it seem more dirty. I love it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Was there a jump in time? Or Flashback? If she was eating tacos - why is it a huge deal now?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Part 2 please

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What a slow cooker. Loving this so far. With other stories I normally leave it a while before I read part 2, but I cannot wait. I'm off to part 2 now.

Rosbrook1Rosbrook1over 1 year ago

This has got the makings of a great story. Keeps the reader wanting more. Cant wait for 2 and beyond?

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I enjoy writing "slice of life" situational stories the most. I love the dance that goes on with flirtation, gauging interest, subtly trying to understand each other's motivations as they explore the possibility of a connection, either emotional or physical. The stories that...

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