All Comments on 'Unicorn Ch. 03'

One of the best stories I’ve read. Thank you very much!

Thank you so much for a happy ending. Who can tell where there lives might go from here, but I'm so glad that Kim was able to accept herself and her love. I will be seeking out anything else that you write. One of my faves!

You are awesome to your stories happy endings. Like other stories this series was also excellent. We want to read more whatever it would be.

A brilliant conclusion to a wonderful story. Thank you

The three stories were so, so good! I wish there was going to be more... I do think this one could have been longer, but that may just be me sad there is nothing more to read!

I have no idea who you are - but your writing is amazing. I just finished Hazel, and tonight I couldn’t stop myself from reading “Unicorn”. I will look forward to more stories (hoping there will be a lot more in the future). I am already a fan!

//azenna

A wonderful love story! Thank you!

Really enjoyed this. You have a real talent for storytelling. Great balance between love and lust. Thanks for sharing. Oh read Hazel too, more of that would be nice if you can.

Glad your coming out went well in the end. Good luck

Build up in chapter 1 was excellent. Chapters 2 and 3 were quite short; left some gaps, and did not do the wonderful characters justice.

Great story but should have been longer.

I got caught with Hazel and ended up reading all your other stories! These have been amazing, thanks for sharing them with the world.

I really thought you were going to have them break up for a moment and I was prepared to be really mad .. but you didn’t .l what a great story.. thank you so much.. I love your style .. this made my day .lm❤️

Is where they should be. I also felt chapters 2 and 3 could have been longer. It appears you had a lot going on while you worked your way through them. They are great characters and to me it seems there is a lot of who you are in them and their love. Like others here I'm a sucker for romance and happy outcomes. This was your first story I have read and I am glad to have the opportunity and read the others.

This needs more it’s too good

Loved the story, just enough tension and drama to completely hook me.

Unicorn Was An Awesome Story!!

I loved the entire story and agree with 1-previous commenter, that Chs.-02 & 03 could have each been a few pages longer. None the less, Ch.-03's ending was just beautiful and what the doctor ordered🎉!!

Definitely Rated 5*-Stars For Me!!!!!

Really enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing it.

Wonderful! I love a sweet story, with a happy ending. (I knew mama would understand. ❤️)

Taking in the time and the world is moving now, this was a sunshine without clouds, just pure sun rays ....... Sometimes a simple ring, ok with some stones ok diamonds, can change the mood quite easily ....... Thank you for this lovely romance

Nice romantic story.

Yaaaaayy loved this story! I am a sucker for a happy ending!! You had me nervous in part 2 lol! I am very pleased

Jumping around between past, present and future was just a bit too much. Sorry. I much preferred chapters one and two.

You're very talented, thanks for this great series

You had me worried at first my romantic heart was nearly breaking. Glad this ended as it did. My heart has sung for every one of your stories my only regret is there aren't more. Though I am exceedingly grateful you shared these wonders from an obviously wonderful heart.

Who doesn't like a good old happy ending when the characters involved are so lovable ?

Thanks for sharing, 5 stars all the way.

Sweet.

Aww too short, great story

This is a great story!

I hope you continue the series!

Great romantic story. Five stars of course! The first two chapters flew by… this last chapter, with the flashbacks, needed me to pay attention a little more. But who doesn’t love a happy ending?

Thanks for sharing such a lovely story.

Rose Monroe 🌹