by largefan
Thanks for writing the story but the 'fantasy' ending was a real let down. It had a lot of Other different ways it could have gone. Sorry.
Great story. Can't help but hope more chapters are in the pipeline to be released soon.
This was not one of my favorite stories, particularly the ending. However, your writing style is excellent. This made a mediocre story become great. I’ll excited to search for more of your work.