All Comments on 'Unintentional Nudist Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Could of been a better ending..

Thanks for writing the story but the 'fantasy' ending was a real let down. It had a lot of Other different ways it could have gone. Sorry.

StangrynStangrynover 7 years ago
Loved it

Great story. Can't help but hope more chapters are in the pipeline to be released soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Ok

Great buildup... POOR ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Excellent writing skills

This was not one of my favorite stories, particularly the ending. However, your writing style is excellent. This made a mediocre story become great. I’ll excited to search for more of your work.

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