All Comments on 'Unity'

I really liked your story. Firstly, while it alludes to religious aspects, it doesn't insult or criticize them. Secondly, it doesn't disrespect the traditional aspects of marriage and spousal sexuality. This story, which I'm glad didn't turn out to be a vitriolic piece, beautifully explores tender areas of marital and spousal intimacy. Very refreshing to read, and extremely hot as well. Five ⭐ s!

I just have one complain: What about June?! The work, time and efforts she put -- that definitely shouldn't be charity!!

Having had a wife who felt the same way, I wish her mother had been more like June. Unfortunately, I think she got it from her mother. So no help, for me/us from there.

Note the HAD a wife........

Lots of possibilities for next part, such as June convincing her daughter to have her as a coach for the next week or two...