All Comments on 'Unknown Desires'

oh how i wish my transition was like this . could there be more to this story please . thank you .

Although it might be PC, the constant use of "they" as the protagonist's pronoun is jarring in a story with (otherwise) some pretty good rhythm. I stopped reading about halfway through.

Hey! Saw something and I want to explain;

Eliza's pronouns changing throughout the story is meant to be a reflection of her awakening and opening up to her gender identity.

Also, if you don't like singular they, understand I'm non binary, and They/Them as a singular pronoun is a normal thing for me and my life. I'm gonna use it- and I hope reading my work opens you more up to it :)

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