by Smuttyandfun
Tell us there is another installment(s)! Tate & Zoe are too hot to let this be all we get a glimpse of........
Please, Mr. Author?
Well done characters, nicely written. Thank YOU!
Obviously incomplete but hopefully a second chapter is coming. I will say I pretty strongly dislike the guy, but I’m interested in seeing the next chapter.
From the ideas, very original, to the characters, description of the situation. It's really fun to read. The psychological and speaking banter is really funny to read. Please, you can't stop here. I hope to read a sequel soon
Love the chemistry between these two. Well written and great dialogue. Please give us more, can't wait.
Very intense. Loved it! Can't wait to read more. I really enjoy your work. Very creative and talented. I've never been turned on more w/o a single drop of sex(besides the beautiful obvious intended foreplay)MORE PLEASE.
Very well-written and paced! Read like a novel! BRAVO! Finally a piece of writing on this site that is almost as good as mine!
So well written. These two are so hot together. Can't wait for the next chapter, and hopefully more after that. I really like your characters and your dialogue is amazing. 5 Stars! Well done!,
Sounds typical, his brother and her sister don’t invite either party to their impulse wedding but are quick to impose cat-sitting on their respective sibs.