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DarkSmithDarkSmithalmost 5 years ago
Please......

Tell us there is another installment(s)! Tate & Zoe are too hot to let this be all we get a glimpse of........

Please, Mr. Author?

Well done characters, nicely written. Thank YOU!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great Story!!!

Love the chemistry with these two. Now we need the rest!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Good story so far

Obviously incomplete but hopefully a second chapter is coming. I will say I pretty strongly dislike the guy, but I’m interested in seeing the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
So good!

From the ideas, very original, to the characters, description of the situation. It's really fun to read. The psychological and speaking banter is really funny to read. Please, you can't stop here. I hope to read a sequel soon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great Story So Far

Love the chemistry between these two. Well written and great dialogue. Please give us more, can't wait.

MistressMissy08MistressMissy08almost 5 years ago
This is amazing

Very intense. Loved it! Can't wait to read more. I really enjoy your work. Very creative and talented. I've never been turned on more w/o a single drop of sex(besides the beautiful obvious intended foreplay)MORE PLEASE.

KIMCANCER3040KIMCANCER3040almost 5 years ago
Tremendous!

Very well-written and paced! Read like a novel! BRAVO! Finally a piece of writing on this site that is almost as good as mine!

kinkygeezerkinkygeezeralmost 5 years ago
Wow! Really Good Story!!!

So well written. These two are so hot together. Can't wait for the next chapter, and hopefully more after that. I really like your characters and your dialogue is amazing. 5 Stars! Well done!,

goducks111goducks111almost 5 years ago
fantastic

very well written, clever storyline. WOW! 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Sounds typical, his brother and her sister don’t invite either party to their impulse wedding but are quick to impose cat-sitting on their respective sibs.

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