All Comments on 'Unleashed'

by rabid_cougar

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good premise

But lacked details. And lacked dialogue. And the transformation from non-cheater to cheater happened too quickly; better with some reticence and a slow, step-by-step change to a willingness to cheat.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

That was good, I think it captured the frantic need/desire to just fuck that happens sometimes. The fact that you're older than your lover is neither here nor there, it just means his recovery time is probably that much faster and you'll soon be fucking again! Enjoy Babe!

xx Ken

KingCuddleKingCuddleabout 3 years ago

BRAVO, all around!

Are you near Nashville? :+)))

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