All Comments on 'Unleashed Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wonderful Story! Five Great Big Stars

Loved this story. Perfect happy ending. Hot, funny and so well written. I just wish there was more!

kinkygeezerkinkygeezerover 4 years ago
Great Ending to a Terrific Story

Such a great read.. And the ending was perfect. Thanks so much for sharing!

nthusiasticnthusiasticover 4 years ago
Just an FYI

Palominos are bright yellow, ideally the shade of a freshly minted gold coin; only the mane and tail are white. Remember Roy Rogers’ famous horse, Trigger?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow Terrific Ending

Loved this story. So good. Five Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great story

Amazing superb perfect great story Zoe and Tate were perfect together great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent Series

Thank you for this entertaining story. Loved all the characters (even dad) and the plot. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Soooo Good!

Loved this story. And a perfect ending too. Just wish there were more, Great sex and I Just loved Tate and Zoe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great!

Grear story! Another one which benefitted in not bringing in other parties for the sake of it. For some stories it makes sense but for ones like this one it's not needed. Really lovely story. Nice work!

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunover 4 years agoAuthor

Just noticed the comment about the Palomino. I always try to research my stories for accuracy, and if you google 'White Palomino', there are images of pure white for this breed, though they are more rare. So, Tate actually did ride into town on a white Palomino to rescue Zoe, to prove how much he cared! Just thought I'd share this.

Cheers and Happy New Year to All!

Smuttyandfun

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great series, wanting more

Enjoyed the series, very nice love story. Hoping for another few chapters as their married life in Australia heats up.... keep it going

I know I am not the only one that wants more of Tate and Zoe!!!

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623about 4 years ago
Awesome!

What am amazingly great story. Great characters, great theme, good flow. I was a little upset about some of the Zoeisms. Until the conversation between brothers and near the end of Chapter 9 when Tate said that he understood her father a bit better. Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!! I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Fantastic series! 5 + stars

Ginger630Ginger630over 3 years ago

Amazing story!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Bruh

I never thought I would get sick of erotic literature. Then i read this story.

strebor190strebor190about 2 years ago

Loved the whole story. Thanks for the good read.

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