All Comments on 'Unlimited Power Pt. 01'

This is a good story. Cannot wait for the next chapter. AAAAA+++++

Very good start. Keep the good stories coming!!!!

Great start awesome can't wait for the next chapter to see how you develop the story

Very good. Keep the story going but please don't include some other magical person set on destroying the Jinn

More please love the build up and Laura's understanding of Jade.

Thanks for writing

Very nice. Of course, it begs the question of what other magical beings exist? Are there people who know about the genies and are hunting them, trying to get their power for themselves? This would be the greatest discovery in modern times, and I'm sure our hero would think about that once he's done boinking.

Overall, two thumbs up and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

A wonderful start to this story. There is so much that you can do with this foundation, and I look forward to reading it!

Nice start. Title notwithstanding, I will say that a problem I often have with genie stories is that there needs to be a cost of some kind for the exercise of the genie powers. Otherwise, there is no tension or problem that cannot be solved in a moment with genie wishes... and if that is the case you might as well end the story right here.

Very good story. I've enjoyed most of your stories. Please keep it up.

Great opening chapter!!! I love Genie stories...

I really loved this story. You once again brought your characters to life. I hope you will be adding many more chapters. On an other note, I hope you continue with the story The Prize. 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Based on your prior stories, I can't wait for following chapters. Thank you.

Love it, looking forward to further chapters. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I would keep Laura as my slave concubine and not share her with Jade at all. I would want both women to be concerned with me and me only, not each other. No female sharing.

Scores thus far 5/5

A wonderful story that not only has incredible possibilities but also dire consequences. That last line really makes me wonder when the hammer drops. Aside from the usual genie stories, I loved the way you handled when Laura first walked in to meet Jade. I found it pleasantly surprising that you didn’t use the usual response of wishing her to accept the genie but instead she was more of a teacher and guide to what was going on…very original and well thought out. Thanks for posting this.

J.D.

Ehhhhh. Sorry, this doesn't cut it for me. The characters seem very flat - it's the first chapter and there are no character flaws, they're handed everything on a silver platter, and there's basically no way to build dramatic tension or obstacles. (Like the title says - unlimited power.)

...Not to mention the bad women's anatomy on both placement of the hymen and what losing your virginity is normally like. (Hint: it doesn't actually require the shove and snap like so many stories here think - at least not for most of us.)

It's fine if all you're looking for is a quick stroke story, but that's not my jam, so I'll leave it for the people who are interested in that.

Nice start. The love triangle aspect is amazing. Adam seems like a bit of a stupid, passive pussy though. I don't know why so many stories make the male main character like that....

oh my fuck, this guy is hurting my head at how slow he is.. i literally feel a cloud of weight press down on my brain watching him process information slower than a 1990s internet speed connection. i bet his brain even makes the same sound as he is thinking..

It's somewhat annoying that all the answers seem to appear conveniently, the genie need to be imprinted and his girlfriend suddenly knows precisely how and when,