All Comments on 'Unliving Lust Ch. 02'

I want both, of course!

What do Grey Wraiths do?

do the demonic summoner part and then have it so the summoner had an apprentice that constantly sent his or her demons after them.

Separate areas where two different things are going on simultaneously. It was hard to figure out why Snatch wasn't rescuing her until I realized they were in separate locations.

So are we to assume this is the same Snatch from after the nymph incident?

"So are we to assume this is the same Snatch from after the nymph incident?"

Or before. ;)

"Use page breaks for change of location"

Ooh, that's embarrassing. Formatting on this site can be tricky because once it's posted that's generally it--not worth going through the whole editing rigmarole. Thanks for letting me know, though, I'll be careful next time!

This has an interesting start, and I'm enjoying the characters. I hope you'll continue this.

Well, Evergreen's at a natural break point so I vote to find out what happens in Unliving Lust. And it's implied in the first chapter of Evergreen that Larya is dead now ("she wasn't exactly in a position to miss it now") , so anything could happen! :-)

On the edge of my seat from chapter 1 of unloving. I would love some more of this series and please don't kill larya, regardless of what it currently looks like. Deus ex machina with snatch saving the day and larya getting revenge for the poor townspeople and redemption for reds.

This is good, but I vote you continue Evergreen.

Druidess would make a great undead.