All Comments on 'Unlocking a Wave of Carnal Fantasies'

please learn the proper use of tenses in the english language. I couldnt focus on the story at all

if you cant be bothered with that at least avail yourself of an editor

your stories are fun to read and they're sexual.

Loved the story but there were several mis-spellings and improper use of words, but, I got the point and loved it!

An volunteer editor for Literotica would have this story a hot 100%.

I liked the premise, the story did have a few slow spots, but keep writing. If you enjoy it that's all that counts.

Let's see Mrs.Anderson get into a threesome Now, also you might include her son Tom. I loved it!!!!!

your lucky the writers of taboo2 dont hit you with a plagerism suit sounded a lot like the scene with honey wider and her son. maybe thats why i liked it even if the addions werent written very well

Your writing was horrible it might have been a passable story if you could write properly. use periods and commas correctly please and would you never write again if all your going to do is copy from a already well known movie. good job though being a plagarist though

In the first part of this hot story, he refers to her both as Ms Anderson and Aunty, mmmmmmmmmmmmm

whatta fantastic story.. Let us knw, will he be able to fuck her pussy?

I want to fck these Moms

Mother/son is the best incest and this went well, not any of those guilty feelings that people have, most of them are because they think they are SUPPOSED to feel guilty. To just enjoy and then celebrate it the very best thing. Thank you for writing.

we definitely need to see more of this story. Does he get to hump him mommy? Does he visit his friend's mom again? Are the two of them willing to share?

Hope there’s another chapter love to find out if he gets his mums pussy

Obviously written in India, so why are the people called 'Tom', 'Mrs Anderson' etc?

on gay anal crap.

The story was good but the grammar was ruining parts of the story as they were backwards! Do you have some Dyslexia?