All Comments on 'Unplanned Vacation Ch. 03'

by JoeyLakehead

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duncmiesterduncmiesterover 5 years ago
Drawn out

It's an interesting story so far, but a little on the slow and drawn out side. I find myself not wanting to continue and your endings aren't drawing on to continue

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