All Comments on 'Unspeakable Acts in Paris Hotel'

HOT naughty woman!! I LOVE it! Well written.

Exceptional erotica! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

HOT. There is so much I like about this. I like the idea of her replaying and reviewing and making it her own. It was all on her terms wasn't it...

Hi Everyone. Let me know what you like or don't like! If you are giving less than 5 stars then leave a comment, let me know what you didn't like....

Very, very HOT, Olive! What a wonderful, sexy, dirty secret! 5 stars!

I love this very sensual and highly tactile encounter.

You are a delicious writer, Olive...

Very well written, and very erotic! I loved it.

I like the window into her internal thoughts. I can relate to *some* of this... 5 stars

Nicely written. So many nice little twisted details here.

I like the "brazen" approach.

I like that her husbands 'mild neglect' made her infidelity sweeter!

I like the bits that describe her processing and savoring the after effects! I can just imagine her getting continuously distracted by the sensations in her posterior for several days afterwards.

"not a valid type of virginity" LMAO!

Deliciously dirty. Repetition is fine, but maybe spread it out more? The same phrase repeated 2 or 3 times in quick succession was a little distracting to me. But overall excellent 5 stars.

I've stayed in a Hotel-F1. It is true they are not high class! Would have liked to meet Amber while I was there!

As a French man I have to say I am outraged!!!

This is outrageously HOT!!!!

What a delightful dirty and nasty story about this woman selling her ass for a sexual thrill with a wonderfully compassionate John.

An interestimg idea, well written. I'll have to think about writing some version of this.

Wow. 5 stars. It's been a secret fantasy of mine to do something like this. I'm kind of inspired now. Not sure I'm fully inspired enough to go through with it.

But it absolutely inspired a week of masturbation. I've re-read it every night and it has not lost any of its power!

Randomly ran across your writing. I love your work. Certain parts of me like it more so. Please keep writing.

I loved this

delightfully told

Ahhh lovely, but did she subsequently let her husband into her whore bottom... paid or unpaid?

I'm not quite sure why it's taken me so long to find you as an author, but I'm rather glad I did! Great story and great storytelling.

i love womens asses...