All Comments on 'Unspeakable Acts in Paris Hotel'

i love womens asses...

I'm not quite sure why it's taken me so long to find you as an author, but I'm rather glad I did! Great story and great storytelling.

Ahhh lovely, but did she subsequently let her husband into her whore bottom... paid or unpaid?

delightfully told

I loved this

Randomly ran across your writing. I love your work. Certain parts of me like it more so. Please keep writing.

Wow. 5 stars. It's been a secret fantasy of mine to do something like this. I'm kind of inspired now. Not sure I'm fully inspired enough to go through with it.

But it absolutely inspired a week of masturbation. I've re-read it every night and it has not lost any of its power!

An interestimg idea, well written. I'll have to think about writing some version of this.

What a delightful dirty and nasty story about this woman selling her ass for a sexual thrill with a wonderfully compassionate John.

As a French man I have to say I am outraged!!!

This is outrageously HOT!!!!

I've stayed in a Hotel-F1. It is true they are not high class! Would have liked to meet Amber while I was there!

Deliciously dirty. Repetition is fine, but maybe spread it out more? The same phrase repeated 2 or 3 times in quick succession was a little distracting to me. But overall excellent 5 stars.

"not a valid type of virginity" LMAO!

Nicely written. So many nice little twisted details here.

I like the "brazen" approach.

I like that her husbands 'mild neglect' made her infidelity sweeter!

I like the bits that describe her processing and savoring the after effects! I can just imagine her getting continuously distracted by the sensations in her posterior for several days afterwards.

I like the window into her internal thoughts. I can relate to *some* of this... 5 stars

Very well written, and very erotic! I loved it.

I love this very sensual and highly tactile encounter.

You are a delicious writer, Olive...

Very, very HOT, Olive! What a wonderful, sexy, dirty secret! 5 stars!

Hi Everyone. Let me know what you like or don't like! If you are giving less than 5 stars then leave a comment, let me know what you didn't like....

HOT. There is so much I like about this. I like the idea of her replaying and reviewing and making it her own. It was all on her terms wasn't it...

Exceptional erotica! 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

HOT naughty woman!! I LOVE it! Well written.