All Comments on 'Unspoken Attraction'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
"...maybe it's better if I'm fucking Ben's dad as opposed to other men out there in the world."

So, being faithful to Ben is not an option?

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You spent the story laying out that, outside of Ben, her only other attraction is the Steve -- Steve and only Steve -- but the you suddenly threw in that sentence, which clearly implies that she was going to cheat on Ben at some point, it just happened to be his father.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
PRETTY DAMN GOOD!

A tantalizing account and a good read. I can easily imagine her sharing herself with the both of them, and loving every uninhibited minute of it!

AuralStimulationAuralStimulationabout 3 years ago

"Sometimes I look at my engagement ring when I run my fingers through his hair as he eats me out." I love the mental imagery combined with the complex mix of emotions. I love this author's writing.

racfguyracfguyabout 3 years ago
Mari

What a slut.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

The father cheated too... in fact his was worse as he is married. Sexual double standards!

JimmyukJimmyukabout 1 year ago

Beautifully written thank you….

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