All Comments on 'Untethered Pt. 03'

Outstanding - it's so rare to find a story that combines such heat with realistic relationships.

Rich, poignantly erotic story; have so enjoyed this page-turning tale of two well developed characters. Maybe more about Jamie and Shaie? You write so well.

Not going to lie: I felt that after the last part you a) needed a save-the-cat moment to keep me rooting for their "relationship" but b) ran the risk of through it losing some of the tension and mystery you so carefully built up before. So I am quite impressed that you managed to keep me hooked _and_ intrigued. Great job, looking forward to seeing where you go from here!

I just found your work very good story. I would love to read more on these 2.

good story and writing. hope ul contnue ths lovely story.

I really enjoyed how you brought them back together in a believable way. It was the perfect combination of sweet and spicy. Well done! 5 stars once again.

That’s it ? That can’t be the end .. too much left unanswered .. please keep going ... great story ..

I didn’t knew you were Filipino until i saw your comment from the previous story. So grateful I’d stumbled across another talented author whose sapphic stories deviates from my expectations. Again, your stories never ceases to amaze me, always as intriguing and inspiring. (Grabe, halos mahimatay na ako sa sobrang kilig AAH) good luck! hoping to see more of your awe-inspiring works vv soon xx

Thank you all so much for your comments! You guys have been nothing but kind to me, I can't tell you just how much I appreciate it.

That said, this isn't the last of Jamie and Shaie. I feel there's still one more step they both need to take and I'm already trying to work that out.:)

PLEASE keep writing. I went through your stories in chrono order and you're improvement in a short period of time is amazing! Please keep at it.

Jamie, thanks so much for keeping us entertained. I love how you pinpoint either the feelings of jealousy when falling in love, or the difficulty in communicating because you’re all flustered. The parts that always seem to reel me into your world is the sex though. I love how you keep it fresh (no pun intended) between them and there’s always just a bit of an edgy kink to their lusty encounters. And lastly, thanks for inspiring me to slip some yoga back into my workout routine. 😍

Thank you for sharing this, and please keep at it. This is better than 99.99% of published romances. You're good enough to be writing professionally. This story could easily be expanded out to a novel, but if you don't continue it then please please start something else.

Thank you all so much! Your comments are amazing. And yes, I do plan to keep writing. This and the other stories in my head. Thank you!

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I'm glad you liked that part! Thanks for reading!

Amazing story!!

Will you write more chapters tho?

Great story….I loved this..

Thank you for sharing,

Best story I have read on this site, thanks