All Comments on 'Unthinkable Passions'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
very sexy

That story made my pussy so wet! I wish I could do that with my daddy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Dude.

That blew so hard. You should learn how to use quotation marks. Add some detail to the story too. Other than that, it was decent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
ok so that was not the best effort

really this is an adult website stories shouldnt appear to be written by a third grader that is in no way saying the idea of the story was bad rather just that the execution of it the way you laid it out was a bit childish.... there are better lead ins than when she was 16 her dad let her guzzle down sixteen beers then she didnt see him till she was 18 then when she was 25 one day.... creativity is the name of the game here you need to draw in your reader... try again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Hot

I wish I had a young daughter to fuck or even someone elses young daughter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
a delicious story

Makes me want to cum right now! My pussy is dripping. I look forward to more stories from you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Fisting

Well told- no waated words; father/ daughter plus fisting very raunchy

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