All Comments on 'Until Death Do Us Part'

even ghost cucks

especially ghost cucks who can only move on when their wife fucks some rando who she had no idea as coming to her house to fuck her for the first time as opposed to falling in love with someone

I dont understand the element of time here to enjoy it more. I get the concept. But did he just die and has she or had she a lover all along? Will she be dead soon yet she is not 30? How long has he been dead and is this a guy she is now in love with as husband is dead for some time?

for, nothing.

Thanks for trying, I guess. What else is left?

Sorry, remember when he died the vows are done. He is just hanging around. Why her house? Well, for most women it is the last stage in a second relationship. He could have been hanging around for years. The way the story flows, this is her accepting the new guy into her life after her husbands death. Her husband could not let go when she was alone, now he can. She is not alone, will be loved, and still loves him. He can find rest now.

Just a sweet short piece. It is what it is, no need for time or space. It’s not meant to be be analyzed, but just taken for what it is!!

It's all about the emotion, the conflict, the uncertainty, but it never explains why?

Didn't quite get this one.

Killed himself so she could have her new lover.

Was there a point to this mess?

1 star

Ghosts, even when written as cuckolds aren't the same issue. Death being the parting gesture. Hopefully this author will follow the same path.

This is the obvious difference between people who ACTUALLY read the Constitution and those who take for granted what they have heard about it (like the fictional "separation of church and state").

Don't fall asleep

What is the point of this story?.

For a sex story.....

A really creative take on love.

The husband is dead, right? He's finally at peace knowing she will be taken care of and he surrenders to the next life? I should have understood the first time. Interesting story.

“What If” endings are sometimes the mark of a great writer, but this story has too many loose ends. Did our MC die several years ago and his widow has just now found someone worthy? This, the ghost of our MC finally has some peace in knowing she will be happy, and is happy that she still had a thought for him. OR has she been having an affair for a while, the MC recently found out about it and offed himself (or even better, he was speeding home to confront them and was killed in an accident). Not after he is dead does she have a thought (however fleeting) about him.

Man, i had to quit early on. First, I didn't know what was going on. Then I read the last paragraph and i never considered this before, but is it possible this author was one drugs when he wrote this.

Wow powerful great story 5*

Need an ending.

Stupid. Just inane afterlife spiritualist froth. Been watching too much Star Wars and starting to believe the mythology crap?

Ah another writer who can not finish the Dam story or creating the work up of its beginning.

Needs a beginning and an ending.

Finally get the story. It took me four years to understand what’s going on.