by LushTales
The idea of upending her engagement to a less than primal man in favor of a real cocksman added some dimension to this could-have-been-ordinary stroke story. Good pacing, good progression, hot conclusion....nice job!
As the writer couldn't decide on the girl's name I really lost immersion, couldnt finish :(
I’ve resubmitted after fixing the name issue. Sorry and thanks to the reader who let me know. My bad!
Excellent story telling, but felt like it was chopped off and not ended properly.