All Comments on 'Until The Christmas Party'

Raised three daughters who are okay with their mother fucking other men, Duncan sure did fail in life

Awesome story, finally a guy that’s not a cuckold on this web site!

The story belies your monicker. [moniker; US]. Not quite good enough for 5 golden ones, so a bridesmaid from me.

Loved it. You only think you can hide. Some get away with then others feel the brunt of their decisions

An ok read but nothing original. Pretty much a decently written formula cheating wife short story

HALF A STORY, HALF A SCORE

Stupid ending. Just a diatribe.

Get a spell-check tool of some type, please.

What a lame assed piece of shit story. Maybe try writing something original. This was a joke.

Well, you used every cliché in the book. So, so bad.

Most LW stories in sixty seconds.

https://www.youtube.com/shorts/yoB_JFzp5YI

Bleh. No stress, no drama, everything just dumped on the reader.

Cuckold tag required… actually make that a willing Cuckold tag,

Once evidence that a cheating skanky slut wife is in fact a cheating skanky slutwife and you do that head between your legs and don’t confront the cunt then and there , your condoning the affair therefore a willing cuckold.

Good story.

Little depth, was looking to be a good story bit without depth or padding it was a little flimsy

"You don't qualify." - this is going on the list of amazing endings alongside with "Frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn" :) I would ordinarily deduct a couple of stars because he doesn't get a happy end and she doesn't get any real punishment except (going well for her financially) divorce, but for a 750, I think I can live without them.

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However, I AM deducting 1.5 stars for the shithead daughter who (1) knew about her mother's cheating and didn't have the decency, ethics or empathy to tell her father and (2) somehow talking her father into forgiving the cheating and taking the wife back (and only divorcing if she decides to leave the marriage herself). This is bordering on "cuck shit" territory for me.

Short, but right on the mark.

Was a good story. Just sad he had a daughter who knew and said nothing until she found her dad had seen a lawyer for divorce.

For reference D3 schools can’t offer scholarships.

I’d really want to know how the daughter knew, how much she knew, and why she didn’t speak up.

I give this one 5* if only for the classic last line. Loved it.

detroitdave

Giving this a well-deserved 5⭐...

Even though the idea of the MC waiting for his wife to get out of her affair dog instead of dumping her asap disgusted me so much, it almost made me want to barf.

But hey - he eventually woke up to the worthlessness of his waiting. Better late than never, right?

Awful. Daughter knows and does not say anything? How does she know

Don't write about specific topics you know nothing g about. For example a scholarship to a division 3 school

NCAA Division III (D-III) is a division of the National Collegiate Athletic Association (NCAA) in the United States. D-III consists of athletic programs at colleges and universities that choose not to offer athletic scholarships to their student-athletes.

Simil8ar to people writting storied with military topics when they clearly know nothing g about it

Average MSR-BTB story: husband finds out about the cheating wife and divorces her. In this case. one of her co-workers outs her.

A glitch in the story is when the wife claims she didn't know her boss was married and had kids, or that he was a serial womanizer. After working in the firm for well over at least one year (he had multiple women in that company), who can keep secret that he has a wife and kids? Where was his wife at company Christmas Parties?

And what happened when she went outside with the boss and other male co-worker? That was never revealed or relevant to the story. The whole Christmas party part could be left out, because he never followed up with asking her about it. Was it an oversight with the author initially thinking of going in a different direction?

To be accurate anon, D3 schools can't offer athletic scholarships. They do have need based and academic money available. As to "full" scholarships, my understanding was football scholarships are always full speaking of D1. But that info is from a long time ago.

MC needs a whole new family.

Good story and response to other comments one is they are right no D3 athletes scholarship but they do mask them with academic ones if the athlete has good grades. Second the daughter and his kids are older and as I’d have been furious they kept it from me trying to hope she’d stop and it would keep parents together. For me did hubby actually think he stay with her if she stopped? Once a guys wife was following her hubby with a PI called a guy I knew about his wife fucking her husband . She had pics , locations, times and one video. She was a pretty attractive woman and suggested they fuck and rub it in there face which they did . The guy I knew wife went crazy then he hit her with everything he had . Then had her served the same time her lover was served. What people don’t think about is how many people the caught cheating affects. Besides the humiliation you put on your spouse it’s a destruction of immediate family, extended family and even friends who feel funny around one without the other. Cheaters usually feel untouchable after they get away with it a couple of times and of course they usually are very self absorbed people that feel entitled. Years ago this guy at the time much older in his late fifties caught his wife having an affair with a 25 year old motorcycle riding tough guy . He was not a fighter but eventually confronted them and to add insult to injury got his ass kicked in front of the motel the guy just fuck his wife in. She did have the decency to yell at the guy and help her hubby to the hospital with a broken nose along with his ego and heart. He eventually got back with her , that saddened me . He had no confidence or self respect . Also remember all these are stories for ENTERTAINMENT not to rip writers for there thoughts

Not in favor of listening to his daughters and giving the slut more rope especially if hed take her back after her cheating but dod love the last sentence: "You don't qualify.". rk

Short and to the point. No need to drag it with the hubby playing the wimpy shit who just can't get over her and pleads. A reason for his slight delay is given and it's the only acceptable. Kids pleading for some time. And still only a small delay to the inevitable outcome for anyone who isn't a willing cuck.

Very qualified story you wrote 😉👍

5 stars from here!

His daughter knew, and didn’t tell him? Disown the bitch!

ZK

A really well told story with a low point. If my daughter knew that my wife was cheating and didn't tell me, she would be just as history as my wife! 5*!

Good story. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

He just overlooks the fact that his daughter knew and did nothing about it. Neither confronted the mother or told the father. And no payback with loverboy? Didn't like the flat ending.

bit of a flat ending

It has some holes, but pretty good for a short short story.

Interesting but how does this fall into Loving wives. Quite the opposite without any excitement or sex

He escaped the cost of the silver anniversary!

5

Awesome read

It stinks.

He rolled over her like a cop eating a bag of jelly donuts...GONE!!

5 Stars! Short & SWEET!!

Good, but would be good to know what happened to the slut and arsehole. MC could have been stronger and sorted it out earlier.

Don't understand why he waited so long to dump her. "Waiting for her to wake up"? He found out in February and did nothing to stop it for months? What was he going to do? How would he know if and when she stopped and then what? Wait for another affair?

Your very good at hitting back, but before they get the first punch in, I'm reading all your stories but not in order of publication, and am see in a string running through them, nearly saying the same but just that bit different, good I'll give you that but how about changing the pattern a bit, make more of the story either during or after the meeting?

Why do ALL of the husbands wait so fucking long in your stories? They know for months but do/say nothing til just before your story ends.

Waited far too long.He did at least eventually do the correct thing..Your stories (the few that i have read) do have similar tendencies,but still worth reading as the outcomes normally are what they would be in real life as to your written circumstances. Soon as that disappears your stories will deteriorate...4..stars..JZK

Another weak man, he can see it coming but fails to do anything about it because he's too precious. Ah, the Prince syndrome that mothers instil into their male off spring, how wonderfully ironic.

Cute story, enjoyed. Thanks for your writing.

Clearly this is personal

Hope you get your closure

All these stories seem like there is little ending

He's a fool for having waited so long.

God i hope he wasnt having sex with her all that time! Damn.

It gets to be irritating when your stories constantly fall off without a complete ending. Might want to work on that a little. I don't know if you think the endings are clever or you just run out of ideas and words. Or patience with the story. Next time maybe something a little longer and more complete.

Bam just drop the ball. No ending sucks.

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Great ending!

11/10!!!!!

Not sure of football. But my uncle was D3 wrestling college coach for many years. No scholarships in D3.

2nd reading & still loved it. He did no wishy washy. Don't notice my 1st review (thinking that I actually did one!), but this rates 5 stars. Short, wonderful story. Bob

I love it when the wife who’s cheating asks hubby, when caught & faced with divorce, if the years married mean so little to him. You didn’t fully explain how he knew of her cheating— HIS investigation . 3stars. Bob

Yet another great short.

"You don't qualify." Burn! Love it.

5 stars

look 45yrs.come on men.

Cuck husband let it continue for so long because of the bitch daughters, like they're married to the slut. Husband is a fucking wimp.

Was a solid 4 until the last sentence. Then it became an undisputed 5!

Love the last line. Five stars, short and sweet.

His daughter knew and didn't tell him?

Excellent.

Took the MC a while to remember that he really did still have his balls but for a while we wondered!!!

good

I like your stories but they feel more like avengers than anything... Like you decide the punchline and stop there, typically right in the middle... Would be nice to flesh these out a bit more

Maybe it's an American thing, but this author constantly points out that nothing in his life is done for him. The big house, the interior etc etc etc., sounds like bs to me.

Excellent story

BardnotBard

Short sweet and oh so good. Another stupid self entitled bitch bites the dust of the curb

5/5

DAMN! You read my book. Well done.

Darn, does she now have nail holes in her hands? Why? Because he really nailed her. 5*

Cold, calculated and complete….the perfect ending to another cheating slut that thought she was smarter, prettier and better than anyone else. Five ⭐️

So, she worked with him and never knew that he was married or a serial predator? She must have the IQ of a rock.

I hope he had proof if he plans to divorce her or he is going to get drug over the coals in court.

At least the family knows it was her and not him. I wonder how the daughter found out and why she hadn’t told her father until she saw him coming from the lawyer.

It is hard to rate stories without knowing the goals of the author. If this was mean as a short quick hitter, it was brilliant.

Average as he let his daughter talk into being a wimp and cuckold!

He's told of his wife & this guy at work & does nothing? Even when she ignores him @her functions?

Daughter seemed to know about her cheating & convinced her father not to do anything for a while. Seriously? What kind of wimpy & shallow husband allows his wife to continue betraying him?

The last lines: "What about me?" "You don't qualify," somewhat saved the story. 3 stars. Should've been higher. Bob

Hee hee hee

Don’t know how many words that was, but they told a great story.

Husband was kind of a wimp.