All Comments on 'Untimely Child'

lovely stort,so hot to fuck two women,even if one is your sister,never did get to fuck my sister most to my regret.

Like it, but it should have been long, or is chapter ! Or is chapter 2 coming! AAAA+++

I enjoyed your story, but you could use a little editing. Just one example: munificent does not mean what you think it does.

Five stars. Many more chapters please.

Nice story.

Like to see where it goes.

Plenty of legs in this one yet.

I really enjoyed this piece of work. I would like to see where this goes.

What a pleasure to read a story without having to deal with spelling and grammatical errors. The content was great, too. I really enjoyed reading this piece and I hope you will continue to write many more.

Good piece of writing very complete story telling. Thanks for sharing.

I liked this story, but I think you missed a step in the build up. We only got indication that Mark lusted after Emily once they had already started kissing and being intimate. A couple of paragraphs mentioning he had interest in her would have bridged that better.

FFS! That's where I stopped reading.

I like the story. It is different than other incest stories. In fact I feel sorry for Mark but I am happy that he finds love with Emily.

I LOVE STORIES LIKE THIS AND YOU DID AN EXCELLENT JOB OF PRESENTING IT TO US. THANK YOU!

i am not as eloquent as the other commenters, but i sure want to know where this goes from here.

Please, may we have some more!?

It's really exciting when a brother and sister have sexual intercourse with a friend joining and watching.

I enjoyed the backstory and the buildup to the climax.

Loved it, more to do yet though. He has to bed Janice yet and maybe knock his sister up. Mum & Dad may not be surprised considering how they knew how much Emily adored her brother.