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More please

On to the next chapter...

for the next chapter :-)

Thanks everyone who commented, favorited, read it and voted! This is my first submission and I think I've waited long enough. I will be updating soon, hopefully before April is out. Thanks again!:)

needs a little editing, but it looks as if you have real potential as a writer.

Five, for starters.

This ending really killed me

More, more, more Please ! I wanna know more !

OMGoodness. Intense and somuch a part of my life. But now he is long gone from my world. He claims of love during sexual bliss. Leaving me lost and wondering why I allowed him to treat me in such a manner.

Here is to hoping you continue

It was short but more intriguing than half of the stories on here. Can't wait for an update. The story has already piqued an interest for me.