All Comments on 'Unusual Circumstances Ch. 02'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 16 years ago
a real hot story

I will be looking for your next chapter,this is a hot story.

Two sex starved sisters could have a lot of fun exploring each others sex dreams,then acting them out.Well done.....

Rich

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
so-so

it is always better to keep your stories from one point of view if you feel you need to do both then write a seperate story from the other point of view or put it in the third person so you can tell both without confusing the reader

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
more

please more!!

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