All Comments on 'Unwilling Ch. 08'

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langyehlangyehover 9 years ago

Loved it, keep it going please!

sm1982sm1982over 9 years ago
Yasss

So happy to hear Darwin FINALLY gave into his desires for Jared! Love this chapter except for the reminded of Darla..she's kinda annoying but the new life Darwin accidentally put her in does add tension to the plot..

Anywhore, glad Jared and Darwin made love and hopefully, this will help make their relationship stronger and Darwin more secure with submitting to Jared even though Jared loves Darwin's feistiness!

DomXianDomXianabout 9 years ago

Your concept of werewolves is really unique and interesting! I certainly applaud your creativity and the thoroughness of your story. And that Alpha pack twist is really cool! I'm really interested in Hector though. There seems to be a lot in him that hasn't been showed yet. I really like his character personality too, beneath the nerdy boyish look, he certainly seems like a calm, mature, yet feisty strong alpha.

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