All Comments on 'Unwilling Model'

Well crafted story and great theme. Keep on writing, please!

i'd love a part 2..they meet again he blackmails her with the pictures..keep writing please

"The moment I find out you did these go up on the internet!" Great, so idiot Jason then "signs" the pics with his IP address and pretty much confesses to rape without any way to deny it. That's got to be the world's stupidest threat to a victim.

Not the story I imagined at the start. I understand Verbicide's comment and hope Jason gets his due.

And then for some reason, raped.

Would have helped if we knew why Jason hated women, where they were that he could threaten her like he did, to me it read like they were on public land.

All in all very shallow with protagonist and antagonist as stupid as a bag of rocks.

I know this is necro about the above comments but uh, it's fiction? Also, uh, VPN? Some people think they are so smart when they're quite the opposite. I like your writing, Rachel, I think you may like mine too!