All Comments on 'Unwitting Teen Porn Star'

Thanks for writing a story based on my artwork. I’m looking forward to reading it when I have time.

Dunno if u plan posting a follow up or other story at all, I just wanna say ur narration style is erotic and I hope to read more stuff from u. Wish u the best

Really well written story, very hot. I really would enjoy more stories from you.

Thanks hot37sl! Hope I did it some justice. Got plans for another one our artworks.

Yeah Anon, got some more stories in the works.

Hello. Where's the non consent/reluctance shit?

Lol Swewxxx. I will be really worried if you think Savannah went seeking all that shit. I think she would have preferred being a pop star or some other shit like that, but hey, she is still a star so maybe you got a point there. Just don’t expect a court of law to agree with yar lol.

I liked the idea of this story but did feel she accepted everything quite quickly. The first instance I would say there was a little reluctant, but the remaining scenes she did, it appears she did quite willingly.

Merely an observation on my part and not a criticism. I'm no writer!

Thanks for your comment Edthegent! Yeah you are correct. I was going for a type of gullible whimsical character who is okay being led and might even enjoy being led but is still always reluctant to admit it to even themself. I.e they will not seek to participate in such behavior but will resist very little if thus led to participate…think a nice toy for other to play with.

Love it. Fantastic. More please

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I really enjoyed this story please write a part 2

Nobody on earth is that gullible. I like porn as much as the next guy but I hate when people manipulate others they shouldn't be able to breathe the same air as the rest of us.

Clothes, not cloths.