All Comments on 'Unwrapping Orlo'

Wrong category. Gives us a break.

Love it and the slow burn. Getting his interior thoughts are great! He's too wrapped up in consent though. Let go and the fun goes wild.

An odd but intriguing story! The careless attitude of the protagonist was a bit annoying in the beginning, but the banter worked I think. And the erotic parts were pretty hot, even though relatively little happened. Is this the first part of a longer narrative, or a standalone?

This was an incredible little story! Soo excited to see what it goes next!

It's a multi-parter! I have another chapter, covering until the end of this scene/day/whatever, planned out solidly enough that I'll probably have to publish it even if this chapter didn't get the broader love I was hoping for. But it'll be a few months because I'm a big fan of letting a piece age and coming back later.

I'm glad it found some fans! I know this story is polarizing, but I'll take that over mediocrity.