All Comments on 'Up for Air Pt. 02'

Don't stop here, keep the story going.. It will be an adventure!

Very well done, and enjoyable to read.

Thanks...

DV19

What a great read! I know full-well this comment will be buried deeply as more readers discover your words, your talent. Please do share more. Very pleased to be Follower 3 as there will soon be so many more.

I found the initial conversation between Michell and Trevor a bit forced and unnatural, but the rest was well written

Mitchell seems like a great guy - Much better for Trevor than Aaron who seems like an asshole. But why was Mitchell so hesitant to approach Trevor before? He seemed a bit stalkery in the way he followed, stared, had pictures, knew stuff, etc. but I hope that’s just shyness - even though Mitchell sounds like a real hottie. Can’t wait to read more.