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by SerradaC

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PixiehoffPixiehoffalmost 3 years ago

I loved this darling Serrada. I thought you brought the world and the people to life. The ending, while tragic, was also triumphant. For a first effort, splendid, and I shall look forward to more xx

amadeuseroticamadeuseroticalmost 3 years ago

A poetic, romantic and heroic fantasy, paying hommage to a woman you love. A great beginning.

Texasmom32Texasmom32almost 3 years ago

Can't wait to read more.

MaonaighMaonaighalmost 3 years ago
Bittersweet

I stumbled across this story by chance and pleased that I did so. A most enjoyable little fantasy tale and the bittersweet ending was just perfect. Very well done.

bgg437dggbgg437dggalmost 3 years ago

AMAZING ! What an incredible short story ! Glad to have met you and the chance to read our work ! What a work of love and sacrifice ! Moving !

AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

Is it over? I fell asleep.

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