All Comments on 'Up in the Big House - Alt Ending'

Hot story!!! Well done!

Not a bad story. Just not one I liked much. However, contrary to what the 3OH!3 song says Sometimes the BAD GUY WINS, In this one he didn't. LOL

Keep Writing

JH4Fun

MC is stupid, wimpy pussy. After 1st visit to sister, he should've smash face of 1st one and kick her few times, before warning that rest of them will be treated the same way, unless they'll fix their mistake.

Bad nigga is dead - you call that a punishment? He probably felt nothing. Cut off his dick and drill his ass with biggest strapon you can find - few hudred times.

Black bastard should have been given up or left at orphanage

Worse than the original. Congrats, I guess?

Nothing was said to imply that Saunderson was Black. But the girls burned the entire Big House down with him tied down in it. That is a pretty horrible way to die. This was one of my first stories on Lit. and I worked on this for weeks to get it approved. Originally Saunderson had whipped Marcia's Breasts, and totally destroyed her whole chest. That is where the plastic surgeon came from. But Lit just wouldn't approve that for publication. So this story is much more tamed down, but I think it still works.

i think we need more about the new business.