All Comments on 'Up the Farce'

After the first page I laughed my ass off. Juvenile humor at its very best

This story is Fawlty Towers as it should have been done! Absolutely hilarious! I have rarely laughed so much reading a story. The multiple threads in the story were well maintained, and the denouement (or maybe denudement) was excellent. Clearly a 5* effort.

Very good. :) Funny and clever.

On the other hand... A bunch of rich british enslaving and mistreating a person called India..., mmmm...

I loved this story. Very good. Waiting for the next one. Don't be late, please.

-Onkana

@Onkana

Your criticism of India is valid. Although I don't see the DSSGA as entirely posh, just their Financial Officer, having a person named after a post-colonial country that is enslaved and enjoys it is very much not OK. I mainly chose the name India because India Sole is a funny name if you say it fast enough and I missed this wider context.

Just looking into how to edit published stories now and will be looking to change this.

What a blast!

Still have tears in my eyes! This is the funniest story I read in a long time. The images you manage to paint in the head of the reader are hilarious and very entertaining. Thank you!

Zaniest story ever. Author somehow managed to maintain taut plot thread through all the shenanigans and brought it all home. Laughed myself silly at times while reading this.

Fawlty. And hoo doggie!