All Comments on 'Urban Legends 0.00'

An intriguing start ... thank you.

Well done. Very interesting prologue to capture a reader. You are a good scene setter. Please more chapters

Your story is well thought out so far and well written but what stands out is your clear and concise narration. Your descriptive information left no confusion about what was happening in both the scenes and the minds of characters which is a talent that is incredibly important and others could learn from reading your work. While it is very early into this story, you have an excellent start and I am amazed that this is your first posted story. I anxiously await your next chapter and also anything else that you create and post. Thank you for the time and effort you put into this story.

Be well and stay safe.

J.D.