by winkifyoulike
It didn't make me wet. It did make me irritated and a bit angry at him. The pov used and the way the narrator told the story feels detached and cold. I got no feel for her emotions, only her physical responses which seemed more male fantasy than reality. That lack of her emotion left a void for my gut responses. Why include the protect/not hurt you statement then out it to a lie? No lube? No way. No condom use by others? Wth. Set up to fail always grinds my teeth. Four separate orgasms? Nah. Four waves of one orgasm, maybe.
This is a minimalist male jackoff scene. For me, it needs more context, build up and something after. Wham, bam and not even bothering with the thank you m'am. Smh.
Made me soaking wet... as for the no lube comment, pussy juices are sometimes enough to be used. Mine are at least. I liked the pov and it really turned me on. Thank you