All Comments on 'Used and Abused Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I liked this a lot, love a good cunnilingus story. Hopefully there will be more stories with more pussy licking and some reciprocation from the aunt....I’ll bet she can suck a mean cock.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 4 years ago
Denial of incest

So many people involved in incestuous relations pretend it didn't happen as a coping mechanism. Auntie will be calling him downstairs very soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Oh dear

I wondered why this story had such a poor rating. Then I read it.

He proffered being on his own. Or preffered?

She was wearing a white bathroom? Or bathrobe?

Capital letters where they weren't needed.

Doors that open and close instead of opened and closed.

You really should have read this story several times before you posted it.

It was like you knocked it off quickly.

It was a bit of a clichè too.

Pope1944Pope1944over 4 years ago

It's a good start to what could be a series. Don't let the people looking for perfect english or grammar bother you. They are mostly jerks. If you want some help editing I am willing to do that. I have edited for other authors on Literotica. You can email me at mg32944@hotmail.com if you are interested.

Rifraff123Rifraff123about 4 years ago
Great story line

Really turned me on, eating pussy is about as good as it gets..... what a nice aunt!

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Due to ill health as a child meant I missed out on education. One of my worst subjects was English. I've never written anything in my life apart from the odd letter. I don't pretend to be a great writer and can't imagine ever being so. I started writing for my own pleasure and...

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