All Comments on 'Used and Abused Ch. 08'

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dokonodokonoover 3 years ago

yeees it continues... very nice chapter

HotRodLincoln69HotRodLincoln69over 3 years ago
Not really!

The pissing did nothing for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Please , please , please , write more! A rendezvous between misty and arthur maybe?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

That story was long, perverted, and really sick. Thank you, I loved it. I know how you feel while your working your ass off being creative and some asshole comes along and tells what you are doing wrong and telling how to go on with it. I do metal sculpture and while in the middle of making it, sometimes, someone comes along and tells me what is wrong with it or what to do next. There is nothing I hate worse then when that happens. I do my best to make it in private until it is finished.

SmellerSmellerabout 1 year ago

Would've loved if one of them slipped a "See you at school" to set up the next chapters.

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Due to ill health as a child meant I missed out on education. One of my worst subjects was English. I've never written anything in my life apart from the odd letter. I don't pretend to be a great writer and can't imagine ever being so. I started writing for my own pleasure and...

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