All Comments on 'Using Her Hall Pass'

perfect

Nice for q quicky.

It's a daring premise: A wife (experienced swinger) inviting an unknown into a 3-some. But it's well written and well described. Quite an enjoyable adventure for sure. It makes one wonder if Kate will encourage Cory into swinging.

Idea is great, execution barely sufficient.

nice story but way to quick. needed more build up also needed more as way of a sex scene. could have also talked about what happen after the text message like did it go on all night , in the morning, it is a several day conference so did any get it on with out both husband and wife togther? left way to much out there.

Singularly flat with no drama or tension at all. Writing is good.

Needs some editing and polish along with a bit more detail...great concept.