All Comments on 'Vacation Ch. 05'

Wonderfully written and so descriptive. You made the seemingly quick act of felatio last a long time, using a plethora of words to keep your readers attention to the very end. Great job!

Thank you so very nice for the nice compliment. I just write about things that I enjoy doing.

if they pulled of the highway to find a secluded spot why were they heading back to the interstate.?

They weren't headed back to the interstate, another car drove past them in the parking lot headed to the interstate. The other car drove slowly past them headed to the interstate. I hope this clears this up for you.