All Comments on 'Vacation Fun'

by rclove95

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norcal62norcal62over 5 years ago
Brit authors drive me crazy by never naming the wife.

Is it the British school system that imprints this habit into them?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
fantasy

For one thing you need to look up the meaning of derogatory.. Way too far fetched and not the least bit believable.

kvijaya508kvijaya508about 8 years ago
Nice story!

I would feel awesome to have an experience like this with my wife.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
very sexy

Wish I could have this experience! I am about to see if my wife will suck me off, as I found out she sucked guys off when we were dating!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Sure it changed their relationship

He went home and divorced the slut. Who wouldn't? This is just another wimpy cukold/cheating slut wife story that wasn't very well told. Nothing clever or interesting.

norcal62norcal62over 10 years ago
My wife, my wife, my wife.......

Another LW story with the wife depersonalized until late in the tale. Seems almost like the author tripped up and gave wifey a name finally.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Fucking Brit garbage !!

1* !!!!

norcal62norcal62over 12 years ago
Gee, it's too bad "the wife" didn't have a name.

I guess in Britain that's the style.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Better Your Wife Than Mine

That is if you have one.

ErotonautErotonautalmost 14 years ago
Not very fair

Our narrator didn't get to fuck Patty (or if he did, it happens offstage). Cari, meanwhile, appears to developed into a bit of a slut (which makes her coyness in the more recent "Cottage Fun" a little surprising).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Wife's name?

What is your wife's name? Does she have one?

ROGERDALEROGERDALEover 14 years ago
Top Notch

Very well written. Enjoyed it very much, it is written with such ease of flow i think it must be a true story. looking forward to more.....

sirhugssirhugsover 14 years ago
But...

...who was the fatherr of baby #5?

And did Cari ever go back to fuck the masseur?

ohnudeoneohnudeoneover 14 years ago
Nice

Greatly enjoyed it, will look for more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very Erotic!!!!

Thanks. Still stroking.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
encore, encore!

let's see some more about this recently enlightened couple.

big10232big10232over 14 years ago
vacation fun

like continue with it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
another

another gay man who writes in loving wives.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Swinging story. Nothing erotic.

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