All Comments on 'Vacation in the Brazilian Jungle'

of an editor; spelling help, word order and a coherent story.

so so so bad

It certainly was different...and unique. I didn't understand the ending, however. The author has a great imagination.

Thank you! The last paragraph hints that his dad tried to rescue him. In typical Western fashion, he had all the gadgets (= armed to the teeth), yet failed to competently land his parachute or was so clumsy that he already got killed mid air.

Word usage problems, tense errors, yet compelling in places.