All Comments on 'Vacation in the Brazilian Jungle'

Word usage problems, tense errors, yet compelling in places.

Thank you! The last paragraph hints that his dad tried to rescue him. In typical Western fashion, he had all the gadgets (= armed to the teeth), yet failed to competently land his parachute or was so clumsy that he already got killed mid air.

It certainly was different...and unique. I didn't understand the ending, however. The author has a great imagination.

so so so bad

of an editor; spelling help, word order and a coherent story.