All Comments on 'Vagabonds'

I came to this website for erotica and ended up crying for the cutest feel-good family story. How dare you (good job).

5 stars only because I can not give it 6 or 7 or 8 etc. Great writing that had all characters literally jumping off the page.

4th or 5th time I've read this story... Feel good story.

Don't really know how many times I have read this story. Definitely 💯 percent deserve 5 ⭐✨⭐✨⭐✨⭐✨⭐. Sincerely thanks from Singapore.

5th read, still an epic story🥰

I have no idea how many times I read this story. I only have one thing to say. Perfection. Five stars, of course.

JPB NOT BOB

It takes two charming waifs to reignite a broken marraige? What a blessing, and another yet to come?

Gratitude. The kids worked hard to overcome their handicapped childhood and were immensely grateful for having their dreams come true. Kids that have to forage like raccoons or opossums doesn't say much about our society that establishes a zygote is a legal person, but fails to provide for them as they grow up, a safe, warm loving home and school. (Social safety net?)

Third time I’ve read this. Next time I’ll read it before logging in so I can give it another five stars. Randi, you are the best, not only for your great stories, but for all you do for Literotica. My heartfelt thanks!

Hopeful. Very lucky girls. From living on the streets like raccoons, to being treasured like high school princesses. Nice to be affluent. Still doesn't say much for child care services, does it?

I read this a number of times especially when I get down on the world we now live in. Cry every time but it also picks up my hope quotient. I have a friend that adopted a couple of foster children. She already had 2 and I marvel as her and hubby walk into a restaurant. She is black, he is white. Their children are mixed and the adopted ones are Bosnian and Asian... They interact as a family and love each other more than this soldier thought was possible. This story always brings them to mind. Your stories are always so special and I thank you for sharing them. All The Way.....

What an absolutely beautiful story! You had me right from the first paragraph to the very end!

YEA!!!!! What a tale!!

Te odio, me hiciste llorar y aún tengo la piel de gallina

Autor mala persona!

Many thanks for sharing your gift of storytelling!

ABSOLUTELY FAN BLOODY TASTIC *****

Ah, 4th read! Thanks for a great story! DerMtMan

What a spectacular story. An emotional rollercoaster ride that brought out some serious tears. This is a story I will be rereading a lot.

Excellent even my 2nd time reading it.

Brianna was a sejf centered scatterbrain, until those orphans came into her life. A change for the better, as they were her daughters. She really took to motherhood, and if you don't think so, try hurting one of HER girls. Mama bear would show her scary side. Brianna is a mom and she takes her job seriously! Please write more along this line, 10 stars isn't even close!

Great story,with so much hate in the world it's nice to read about love.

You know, I have read this many times and every time it brings tears to my eyes. I always give this story 5 stars and wish I could give it 10 stars. As with all of your work it is very well written, and the characters are very believable.

The best thing Bri said, was, "I have to talk to your father". They were really their daughters' parents and loved their daughters enough to want to give them brothers, and/or sisters... Children are not hard to make, but, it's what you do with them, after they are in your life!

For once no cheating slut wife involved.. just pure fluff good job

I like this loving wife stories when there isn’t cheating involved, sadly don’t find them too often, but this one was great

Just makes me feel that life is worth living. I return to it often.

I'm feeling good after reading this story.

Probably the tenth read, still the best on the site.

One of my favorites, I re-read every once in a while. Never gets old.

I like how you rarely use blacks in your stories.

I'm sure i shed a tear or two the first time i read this tale. I full out blubbered ,ike a baby this time. Congratulations...you made an old man cry. Bjg ol' crocodile tears of happy. Thank you..loved it.

One of the author's best stories.

Really lovely story. Feels like I could continue reading all about their new family and their future grandkids. But on reflection it's probably a very good place to end, full of promise.

My second time reading this and I don't know why but apparently I only gave it 4 stars last time. I haven't found anything from me in the comments so I don't know why, (it was some time ago, probably not long after joining Literotica), but I've changed that to the 5 it deserves. It's a beautiful story.

Just read this again. So delightful, wish I could give it another 5⛤

Wonderful story, 10 stars isn't even close

Hallmark movie!

Randi, you've done it again! The only thing this story needs, is more than five stars!

What a wonderful story, with beautiful writing.

I guess it is just an American thing that it is credible that a V8 Camarro would be given to a 16-year-old girl. I guess that is why about 42,000 Americans were killed on the roads last year.

And yes, I know it is only a story.

Love it, gives me a warm feeling everything I read it

This is an amazing read, full of love, and a whole lot of growing up. This one made my heart smile.

Sweet! I LOVED it.

I hate love stories, that said, rhis needs to be a movie. Hollywood would hate it, but it needs to be made and shown. 💥💥💥💥💥

Great story thanks for writing, made my day…

Dammit sniffles. Thanks.

It takes talent to make a romance interesting. And, lets face it, sexy. This author has accomplished both. This old man enjoyed reading the story. I was close friends (with occasional benefits) of a flame-haired, high powered woman from public school until well into graduate school. Then we 'discovered' each other after an accidental pregnancy, were blissfully married for 31 years, with three children and through two madcap university careers until cancer took her in 1998. So, yes, it can really happen. Thanks for bringing back the memories.

I was looking at someone's favourites, this was one, I have read it twice before, but couldn't pass up the chance to read it again. It always makes me feel good. And it was no different this time.

Undeniable talent! A must read Romance.

WOW! Just wow. You keep surprising us both, with these gems. Randi, you're the best.

One of your better, feel good, happy stories. Thanks.

I read this story a long time ago. I loved it then. Now I read it again. BR, you are the best.

This is the most satisfying and uplifting story I've read on this site.

This is the most satisfying, uplifting story I've read on this site.

Yes, I know it is fiction and highly unlikely, but I really enjoyed it. Thank you

Sometimes you do get to choose your family. How could you not feel good after reading this story.

Thanks for sharing!

DP

Excellent, sexy, joyful, fun, happy ending, ... what more could you ask for? Chapter 2?

Yes

Fantastic story! Wonderful writing as is always true!

A solid five stars, for an unlikely story that I liked very much.

JPB

Still on page three. You write areolae, which is a correct plural of areola. However, areolas is also correct. Areolas is a more comfortable, common English word, and flows much better in a story. Just a thought. Back to page three now.

JPB

Terrific little tale. Very well-told. A real heart-warmer - we need a bit of that around here every now and then.

Very very nicely done.

Your spouse piling their shoes on top of yours is grounds for divorce, it's true. Great feelgood story, although the girls alternating between talking like kids and seasoned adults got a little jarring at times.

Beautiful women, muscle cars and big wrinkled dogs make a good story! If you had included a Jeep and some guns in the mix it would be a dream life for me. I am only missing the women at the moment and the money I spend on the others is the reason. LOL

applesauce!

I needed a good feeling so I read this again, and got what I wanted.

Wow!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

It worked finally

Give it a ten if I could.. or at least a five. But my dang voting thing ain't working.. oh well 👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌😉😉😉😉😉😁😁😁😁😁🥂🥂🍻🍻🥃😁

Second reading, liked it even more this time, I didn't think it possible

Very well written erotic "soap opera."

Oh my, what a wonderful story that filled my eyes with tears. Thank you for sharing.

Lovely story. Heartwarming. We sometimes forget people do get divorced for other reasons than adultery. Mack and Stokely changed both their lives and brought them back together.

Need more srory

Thanks, I have read this before and it is still a great story. Thanks DerMTMan BC

A wonderful story with no cheating and lots of love. Five glorious stars. JPB

Enjoyed this immensely

That is one beautiful story. Thank you.

Every time I read this it makes me tear up. Thank you for the stories you share with us.

Leaky Faced problem here. Equates to 5 stars

Thanks for a great love story. 5 Stars

Great story but no parent in their right mind would buy 16 year olds a V8 Camaro and a Challenger. Way and I mean way to much car, not in price so much as power and safety. And that doesn't include insurance. Maybe a cute Mini, a dependable Civic or a small SUV but muscle cars?

Great story, maybe I"m just jealous.

New cars are quite a bit over the line, even if the kids had a rough life. A pretty quick change for Bri to become a wife and mother. A fantasy story is allowed to exceed reality. Very good story, though.

Loved it! A feel good story from start to finish. Thank you @Blackrndl1958

Dang, this story resonated with me... 10 stars!

Excellent story except for the sudden change in how the girls talked once they settled in. The conversation on the patio did not reflect how a preteen actually talks. Still a 5* story, though.

Totally out of the realm of reality, all the characters, and the plot, too. But WUNDERFULL, a 5* fairytale.

This is the third time I've read this story. There aren't enough stars in Literotica for this one. You are the best, Randi!

Corny, sappy, hallmark-ish. Bah

Yeah, I loved it! Great story! Thanks

25 stars!! Randi, you are something else. It sounds crazy, but could you continue this story? Brianna hasn't had a baby to nurse her breasts and make a bond, and the girls need a baby sister, brother or both. Please write another part, as only you can! I love all the stories and writers, but you are exceptional!!

Liked it the 1st time I read it, and liked it just as much the 2nd time !

It's a 5... again.

EastCoaster

Extraordinary story. I will count it among best 10 stories I have ever read on this site in last 5 years. The character of Bri is good beyond extremes. Mack too is unbelievably good. This is the first time I am writing a comment on any story after reading thousands of them.

This wonderful story was even better as a second read. Thank you blackrandl1958.

Great story

The last line is priceless "They didn't look like vagabonds." I've read this story several times and it always is emotionally charged even though i know where it is going. Thanks for sharing your talents John

Another wonderful story from a truly great author, ( like an Uncle Joe's mint ball's, leaves you all a glow look on you tube for the song) love u Randi.

What a different story. Thank you

It's just a bit clunky at times, (the kids talk older than kids that age can talk) but overall, wonderful story, I've read it a few times. Would make a wonderful PG 13 film

LOVED IT.

Really a silly story BUT a good one,

Second read. So powerful as it exemplifies there’s still good in the world. So much better than cheater’s review and man’s inhumanity to man…