All Comments on 'Valentine'

by cedarlooman

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
awesome!

Great piece of fiction(?) That was amazingly detailed, great buildup, nice twist and satisfying finish. Wow!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
More please!

an amazing story, thankyou! The ability to turn a reader on before any physical contact happens is fantastic and to keep the romance and foreplay alive throughout the story was well done :)

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