All Comments on 'Valentine Presents'

Simply amazing.

The writer said it spanned a few categories, it did and it was HOT

A sequel is required

Would have preferred a little more development of all characters. I didn't feel like I really got to know them. Thought the ribbons and gifts were a bit unnecessary. And really, a 19 year old male virgin? All that being said this was a very hot story, if you post additional chapters I'll sure read them. Some of your other stories sound rather intriguing, I'll for sure check them out. Thanks for sharing.

Regards, max052

The idea of the extra, little gifts is based in a real event and so it feels very real to me.

I have background for the 3 main chars and a little for Betty, but didn't want to include too much in this tale. If you noticed, I wrote it as Gail, the mom, and I wanted her to exhibit a breathless anticipation to 'prank' her husband, not be bogged down by too much expo. I will include a little more when Dawn arrives for her sexucation!

After a day a a half in limbo, this story is back. I had to 'XXXXX' out some objectionable bits, but I don't think it hurt the story. Any comments on that?

Kept cock hard. LOOKING FORWARD TO ADDING HIUS GIRL FRIEND

Is there anything more erotic than fun HIV talk and clinical anus discussions? Plus I didnt buy the baby talking, virginal son.

Medically inclined author. Nice special care for health and hygiene. Refreshing naughtiness. I like.

That's hot, AF!