All Comments on 'Valentines in the Dregs'

This is true love. Real,raw and less than perfect. Well captured! This really was anemotional and intriguing read!

Darkly intriguing. I expect nothing but the best from you and you deliver, time and again. Awesome tale of love found in the least expected of places.

Kudos, L_C.

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It would be hard to imagine less romantic circumstances or characters, yet you managed to convert it all into something inspiring and very "real."

The dregs is no place I'd like to live.. but you sure provided a great visit!!!!!!

Great story! Filled with raw energy and power! A great read! ESL

Very well done, LC. ~Imp

Nothing like a little hope to make a person smile.

Good characters and a great romance story.

A well-written, emotional story of newfound hope between two discarded and wounded souls. Outstanding!

A well-written, emotional story of newfound hope between two discarded and wounded souls. Outstanding!

probably your masterpiece, and certainly the best I've ever read! Excellent character development in an unlikely setting. Worth rereading again and again!

Very good, one of the best.It could possibly have been better without the sex. Powerful story about the redeptive capacity of self respect and the beginning of love.105/100. Possibly a bit one paced but that's a tiny quibble. I visualised this entirely in black white & grey.

Powerful tale, powerfully told.

Read half the entries today - this is first love story.

Congrats.

just cant say enough about this story it is one of the best ive ever read.

Powerful writing made even stronger by the Valentine's take. Just sorry it took me so long to find it.

This is most definately the best story I've read yet. It goes beyond the superficial which so many stories incorporate these days. Brilliant.

BY FAR the most original (and, thus, fun to read) style on Literotica! This says much, much more about true, real-life reality than anyone else has. I'm now a fan and will read your other work eagerly.

Very Emotional and a good read. You went to the other side of artistic expression :) A hero story from the 'sorry side of town' with heroes that don't start their day brushing teeth. It's a good counterweight to the all_American hero_school stories people seem to sh* out of their ears here.

It was actually one of the first stories that brought me to tears. The story was multi-dimensional, raw and real, it had depth. Great job.

nicest romance story

Bloody good.

It would be nice to hear them climb out of the Dregs, though.

Thank You

HP

I've never seen a better written short story, but how do you go on to make it better for the antagonist?

What a “Feel Good” story. Didn’t you just love it? Okay, enough with the sarcasm. Truth be told. I didn’t like this story at all. Can’t say why, unless it was the hours of mind-numbing introspection wedged between the few moments of something actually Happening! I know it wasn’t really “hours”, but it seemed like it. I personally found absolutely no redeeming social value in this story AT...ALL.