All Comments on 'Valerie Pt. 01 - Come on Over'

Loved it. A great start, looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks!

Very good !

I normally read through , vote, comment , and move on to the next tale..

This one has had 2 re-reads so far :)

looking forward to the next episode , as ( hopefully ) 'slave' gets put through his paces !

A great start , and a 'cliff hanger' ending... hope chapter 2 is ready to be posted soon !

Very promising young man. Is he the same one as in your Vex and the Badminton Club series?

looking forward to more amazing start