All Comments on 'Valkara's Surprise'

I dident expect to see a squeal to valkara mate I expected it to be a one off story but no this is just as amzaing as the last and to find out there ganna be more now this is exciting u don’t really see story’s like this normally it just the “happy ending” ( which is not really as they die and u feel bad for them) but to give us SOMTHING romance and gentle and u always see hardcore sex but with it being more gentle and calming it brings a lot more enjoyment, it wonderful when done right amzaing work dude

Very Exciting and Interesting story.

Please continue the story-

For future reference, if you write a continuing story then name it with ch 1, 2 etc. At least have a note that this story continues from another.

I almost stopped reading as you never explained a lot of things that seemed to come from nowhere. Decided to chevk your story list and see another one with similar title about succubus. Guess this is part 1, but not going to bother reading more as you obviously didnt bother with the details.

I love these stories of Valkara and Kevin. I wish you would write a third installment with something along the lines of "Valkara thought, and was told, that there was no possibility that she would become pregnant by a human. But her and Kevin's love for one another was so strong that it became possible." Something like that would be amazing because i would rather read about Kevin and Valkara than anything else. I hope to see the two have an even happier ending very soon.

This is the most unique succubus story i have came across because in any other the succubus would want to suck dry her prey rather than loving him. But this is masterpiece! Would like see more of valkara & kevin. Ofcourse would like to see lena also join them. Could it be a threesome? I just love how kind the succubi are shown here & would like if it continued that way.